Anything for a friend

Jun 28 2006  | Views 1831 |  Comments  (13)
Short Story: I would do anything for a friend in distress. Wouldn't you?... Expand

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  kamalji posted 2 yrs ago

Good one.kamal



  highspirit posted 2 yrs ago

This is really a good story. It happens in real life too. The moral here is that this gal fell a pray to that  confidence trickster.Why did the HR Manager requested him to drop her at all? That was the turning point in the story.He gained closer proximity to her. And  I wonder any gal would entertain her male colleague at all when she was living alone?Yes.It does happen.
 
when the unavoidable event occurs,when you can't control a situation,one becomes harder and boosts up one's strength. Therefore I think ,this leaves room for you to write another story as a sequel to this episode.



  Dev Kumar Vasudevan posted 2 yrs ago

Glad you liked the story Sharmila... portraying a person with a negative character is a difficult task, is it not?  



  sharmila pn posted 2 yrs ago

that was a nice story but your charecter  is intrinsically a vindictive person



  keyaa1 posted 2 yrs ago

Nice story.It reminded me about a similar incident which happened years ago.The only difference was that the girl found out the real culprit and broke the engagement.She married someone else and is happily married today.



  Dev Kumar Vasudevan posted 2 yrs ago

Thanks for the comments folks. I have edited the story. Anybody who reads it now will know right at the beginning that it is fiction.



  B S Keshav posted 2 yrs ago

Hi Dev,

Nice story. Very much like 'O. Henry'. He was a master of the twist at the end. I recently read a book of short stories by Jeffery Deaver, the guy who wrote "The Bone Collector". This collection is called: "Twisted". He's very very good. His stories sometimes have more than one twist at the end.

Wish you hadn't used the first person singular narrative style in this story. It started off like a personal anecdote and I only realised it was a story after it ended. Third person for a fictional piece is the best. 

In any case, Good effort.

I'm currently handling a stalking case at the office. Believe me, it's not funny. Maybe I'll write about it once it's through.

Cheers,

Keshav



  TSORY posted 2 yrs ago

spooky...but what happened to the handwriting?

guess the stalker made someone else write it...

bunty,do take care...



  Rrakhee posted 2 yrs ago

Dev,

 

I read the story and felt a resent toward you for a moment until I checked it was in a creative section…  You should have actually posted it in the personal section and after the comments bombarding, you should have declared that it fell under the creative section… ;-)

 



  Antonio posted 2 yrs ago

Awsome! Dev Bhaiya...but I hope this is a work of fiction!

Kabhi kabhi kisi ko paane ke liye na jaane kaise kaise kaam karne padte hain! Bunty G aap bataiye usko bloggers meet ke baad SET kar denge!





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